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Review:megthechef43 says:
Kelsey,

I think your story is a good one. I like seeing a headstrong Ginny, because that is the way she is suppose to be. I also liked see the emotion she felt at losing her family and the possibility of losing Harry as well. I'm glad that Harry was the one to catch her when she started to have an emotion breakdown. I think there a quite a few strong points in your story that could be embellished to make a strong story.

I'm not going to mention much on your spelling and grammar since you are aware it needs some help. It was distracting while I was reading.

I think you need to spend a little time on spelling & grammar and this story, so far, is worth the effort. I would love to read more on Ginny's POV during the war and I think you have the right emotions in place for this to be a very good Ginny novel.

So, Yes. I think this story has potential.

Meg

Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback and not dwelling on the grammar and spelling parts, I've put into the queue the edited version of it and I think its much better than before, i'll probably come back for re-request once its validated and get your opinion then

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