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Review:AdeleShare says:
Hi AdeleShare here with your requested review.
In technique, I can't think of anything to say against it. I think it was powerful and beautifully written. I think you covered (what I think is a taboo topic, I hopebim thinking the right thing here) well. I know it was purposeful to have it quite vague, and I do like that. But I just hope that I am on te same page as to what it was about. That's my only concern, is that it is left a little too much to the readers imagination. And without a definite tell from the author, the reader won't know of they've imagined the right thing ( like me).
The poem bits were also composed magically, I love poetry and the " come,sugar, come" poem throughout is great.

This is my first officially requested review, I hope this is what you were hoping for. Thanks for asking my opinion.
Oh, and there weren't any grammatical errors that I could see! Which pleases me greatly!

As always,
AdeleShare

Author's Response: Hello AdeleShare! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

I'm really glad you liked the technique - I think it's different from what many writers do here on HPFF, you know? I'm so glad you liked that it was vague! I don't believe in handing everything to a reader on a silver platter - I want readers to dig deep, eventually having some sort of connection with the story. I understand that perhaps it is too vague, but it's something I really enjoy doing - making readers come to their own interpretations!

Thank you so much for your review! I appreciate it! :)

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