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Review:manno_malfoy says:
Hey there! I'm here with your requested review.

Although I can hardly admire AU -it confuses me, they way you've written this story kept me engrossed throughout. Your words and thoughts are so meticulously arranged and wonderfully touching! You make Ginny sound so genuine and I found myself sympathising with her.

The flow throughout the story is really wonderful. The way you show us things through Ginny's eyes made things play out in my head like a movie, honestly. Even though you focus on faces and emotions, the way you arrange the events just made things very easy to follow and to keep me interested.

And yes, I teared up once Sectumsempra was shot! I think you wrote that bit very well and focused on bringing up the people that we really would be curious about the state of in a moment as terrifying as such. I found Hermione's reaction very canon; no one can continue to function under a crisis like Hermione!

Anyway, I think that this is a nice, touching read and I'm glad to have come by it. Great job!


Author's Response: Hello! Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such a great review. :)

I used to hate AU too. But then I read some great AU stories here and I started giving it a chance. Although, my head canon is that Harry and Ginny live a long and happy life together. So this was basically an experiment, forcing myself to try something new. ;)

I am so happy you liked the emotions! I tried focusing on emotion the most, but I was afraid this would sound really bland, being just an out-pour of emotions.

I'm glad you enjoyed this, and once again thank you for the review! :)


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