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Review:lilypotterfan123 says:
I love this chapter, the best part was the note Dorcas left to Bellatrix. It was a great touch, and it shows that Dorcas isn't coping very well. You wouldn't though really with your sister dying. However most people make it so the character gets over things too quickly. You've nailed the grieving process quite well.

Mad Eye is down to a T as well! He's very by the book yet he's really powerful and does really risky work. He seems like he's traditional yet has the sort of power that appears to make it as if he could bend rules if he wants!

With Dorcas I'm not sure whether to be excited or scared for her, if Voldemort's going to pay, it can't all end well for her can it! Yet I want her to get justice for her sister, but she can't die!

Overall I really liked this chapter and can't wait for another Cassie, so kudos to you chick and I will definitely stick with this story to the end, even if it doesnt end well for poor Dorcas.

Sorry this review was so short,
Bex

Author's Response: Hi! I can't even tell you how much this review made me smile!

The grieving process for Dorcas will never be over, no matter how long she lives. She would spend her entire life seeking vengeance for what happened to her sister, and I'm pretty sure that in her eyes, no retribution would be enough.

I love that stupid letter, I just had to throw it in there as a final touch.

I love Mad Eye. I expected him to be one of the hardest characters to write, but really he isn't. He's something that just kind of comes naturally.

Dorcas. Well, I honestly don't think she would let herself die at this point, if that's even possible. She has to have at least one more trick up her sleeve, right?

Thanks so much! I'm working on the next, but school is definitely slowing me down.

Your review was lovely!

~Cassie


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