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Review:kjp says:
yayayay! oliver/ Oc story, I love to hear about Oliver's love life... its probably one of my favorite type of stories. This story has such a great start, I was in hysterics all the way through. I'm thinking about adding this to my favorites actually.
I just can't understand how you write so fluently, its amazing and i'm jealous of it. You manage to go from one topic to another with one sentence, something that some writers never manage. (I probably sound like a right fan girl right now, right?)
When it said there was humor in the story I got a tad worried, some people struggle writing humor but you write it with amazing style that makes me laugh all the way through your story. The last line; "So, of course, when Cat walked into the room at that precise moment, I was looking considerably dishevelled and was lying on top of an almost-naked Oliver Wood, my elbows resting on both sides of his head and his hands propping me up by the shoulders" - this line was excellent, its funny and makes you wonder what happened next, i wouldn't call it a cliff hanger but it makes readers want more.
a little spelling mishap or something- "Dangling off you broom, barely held by you..." I think you meant dangling off your broom instead of you.
Overall this is a great story so far i'm so excited to see more from you and this story would certainly be recommend by me to another reader, 9/10 from me.
- kjp

Author's Response: Haha, in hysterics, really? :)

This review, which I read on my phone last night, made me smile all the way through. Do you actually think I write fluently? Thanks, it's not always the imprssion I get when re-reading!

Don't worry, I go around fangirling sometimes too, and it's worse than this!

Yes, the small cliffies or whatever they qualify as are my favourite to write - and they're also necessary because otherwise writing the next chapter would be harder...

Oops, typos... I'll edit that now!

Thank you so much for the review!

:)


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