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Review:shadowycorner says:
I think Mila's a little crazy to leave her son in the hands of James Sirius Potter! Just like your summary said, James might as well be Jacob's baby friend.

The pace of this was very quick and I liked that. I like stories that totlly engulf me and reading is quick and swift and exciting. i also laughed in some places, like when Al turned up being bald and they wanted to draw a nipple on his head, making it look like a boob. That just about cracked me up!

I think some people already mentioned this, but the overuse of mate was a little annoying, but then...some groups of people tend to overuse some word or expression in real life, too. It's annoying as hell, but it happens, so yeah :D

I have to say I'm curious to see how James will handle this, together with his crazy friends. It's bound to be funny, although I still find it strange that Mila would give her son to James since they've never met and she can't be sure whether James is responsible enough. Maybe you should've said he was her last option?

Anyway, let me know when the next chapter is up, that will sure be a blast. Also, what will the grandparents Potters say? :D haha, I can't wait for that!

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