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Review:Jchrissy says:
Happy late birthday from all your Gryffies!!!

This was a wonderful piece, the emotion charging through it kept my eyes completely glued. The idea of the death. Simply an accident, her just wanting to get her drink father away and it went too far, is so heart breaking and tragic. I'm not sure of she meant to kill him, or how she feels about it now that it's done, but it was such a wonderfully crafted piece.

The imagery revolving around the lake and rocking boat, the smell of the muggle bar and Georgia's ideas of what her father looked like standing outside the door.. It was all so powerful.

The father is a wizard because she has his old book, I'm wondering if they're both completely OC's or if you have an idea of who he is?

This was a wonderfully written piece, very chilling but absolutely addicting!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked my one-shot, I don't usually write stuff like this, so I was in pretty much uncharted waters :P
I'm glad you're not sure of Georgia's motives, as I'm not either. I wanted to make questionable morality, so yaaay!

I'm so happy you liked my piece, and thanks so much for the birthday review! :)

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