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Review:AlAndAl says:
Okay so Kiwi and Oliver are adorable! You know you've done a good job with their relationship when I can't stop smiling. Squealing like a complete girly girl, too. Sigh, I'm a sucker for ships.
The only criticism I have (quite miniscule) is that I felt the development in their relationship went a little fast, but it wasn't something that was a big problem. Don't go changing anything (it's perfect, I swear!) by just keep that in mind for the future.

*waits impatiently for next chapter*


Author's Response: I squeal too when I have to write both of them together, so don't worry!

Their relationship is, well, complicated. She doesn't actually hate him, that's the important thing to know. She's furious at him because he swept her up on his broom (that sounds so cheesy), but she's never hated him. She just has a strong temper, and tends to exaggerate the way she expresses her feelings.

Have you ever been in a situation in which when people are like, "Oh, you liiike him", you answer "No I don't!" when actually you're not sure and trying to convince yourself as much as you're trying to convince the others? - Does that make sense? It was a very rambling sentence - Well, that's the situation where Kiwi is. She did have a crush on Oliver before, why wouldn't that be possible again?

I'm not going to say anything else, you'll see for yourself!

Oh, and if by saying the development in their relationship you mean to talk about the part where she wakes up next to him, please bear in mind she was drunk, and wasn't thinking properly...

Thank you so much for the review!


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