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Review:daretodream says:
Well, dinner went as well as could honestly be expected, I supposed.

Seriously though, Draco can be just so PIGHEADED. The entitlement under which he was raised is unbelievable. I can't imagine ever treating/speaking to another human in the ways that he does, and all because he thinks he is superior for absolutely NO reason.

And Narcissa Malfoy, she's a real piece of work, no? I usually have sympathetic tendencies towards her, but your version of her does not appeal to that side of me. Honestly, I think I like disliking her more. Feels more natural.

Hermione though, hopefully she is all right. This has all been a very stressful evening for her, on top of her being wounded, so hopefully she is a bit more careful. Well, she really has no choice now as she is unconscious.

Poor Pamela. I'm beginning to really like her character, though I fluctuate between identifying more with her or with Hermione on their position on what the wizarding society should do with squibs. So all in all, I'm undecided.

I don't know why I never did this last time, but this is in my favorites now so I'm sure not to miss an update. Good work!

~Cassie

Author's Response: In that particular scene he was trying and failing to follow Blaise's instructions. He sensed some sympathy from Pansy for Hermione's new idea, and he was trying to prove Hermione wrong.

Narcissa isn't evil, per say. She's had it rough. She's broke and unpopular, and she's spent the last two years having her pride beat to pieces. Her husband is in jail, and her son's been leaving for long periods of time without telling her where he's going. She's sticking to what she knows, and she's trying to hold together what little remains of her reputation. Maybe I should go back and make that clearer in this chapter. Regardless, Narcissa is mean and annoying, and if I weren't writing her, I'd probably dislike her too.

Hermione's been a bit of a punching bag so far in this story. Hah, hah. Whoops. Well, she's the one who wanted to completely re-haul the Ministry of Magic.

It's good that you're undecided! I'm trying to stress how this sort of thing isn't cut-and-dry or right-and-wrong. They come from completely different perspectives, but they both have rational and correct points of view. I think it sort of highlights how important it is that the situation not occur in the first place. It's a horrifying disability/situation to have if you're born into a society that values magic so much.

Thanks so much for your reviews! You're so wonderful, and it's very helpful to know what you think about characters!

Aether




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