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Review:daretodream says:
Hey there!

Sorry it took me so long to get here...I started back at college the day after you requested, and things have been a bit...hectic.

I'd forgotten how much I liked this story, quite honestly. There is something about the mystery that you have shrouding everything as you slowly piece it all together that is so captivating.

Each chapter brings something new, but it is something I almost feel like I should have known, judging by the information I've already held, if that makes any sense? You're doing a wonderful job with all of the suspense, I'll certainly give you that.

And I'm really growing to like Pamela as a character and have a lot of sympathy for her. It can't have been easy, growing up the way she did. I felt especially bad when she said that they had actually thought she was magical, but that Pansy must have performed the accidental magic to save her instead, and just no one knew. It must be devastating to be a squib in a magical family under any circumstances, but especially when it is unexpected.

All in all this was a really good chapter! I think it might even be my favorite so far. I like the addition of the sleeper agents.

~Cassie

Author's Response: Ah, college... I'll probably be AWOL for a while after I start next week.

I've spent a lot of time thinking about the plot line and the characters and the way I want to bring them all together. I'm really happy to hear that you like how I've set it up so far. Believe it or not, there's much, much more to be revealed!

I'm glad you liked this chapter! :)

Aether


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