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Review:StarryLaura says:
The animagus was very clever. :) Although I think a wolf would have worked better, the black leopard was also fitting.

And it saddens me to see that Hermione's so insecure about the blood issue...I honestly think it's something Draco can help her with, even if neither of them can change the way society thinks. The least they can do is love each other, and hopefully that can be enough. Their world is changing soon, what with the war, and they can be part of that change. Of course, there will always be some people that hang onto their prejudices, but I think that they should fight for their love.

As for Blaise's sacrifice, I doubt that Draco's going to gain any comfort from being with Astoria. I mean, he's already in so deep with Hermione that she's almost the only thing he thinks about. Astoria's not going to sate any desire of his, even if she is kind. He only wants Hermione, as the behavior of his conjured flowers indicated; all of his energy is spent on Hermione now, and he doesn't care about anything else.

I can't wait to see how their relationship progresses and if they ever get to be together. :) Update soon!

Author's Response: StarryLaura,

Oh, how your review puts a wide smile on my face. :)

First, a wolf... I agree would've worked, but I'm pretty sure that I have read him as a wolf before and I wanted to write something different. I'm probably not the first to write him as a black leapard, but I haven't read any. I do love it though... especially for the black color, cunning, and pride. (But a wolf is beautiful as well - agreed).

Ah, yes, it is sad that she is so insecure about it and I am planning on Draco helping her with this in chapter 20 when they spend an intimate time together. ;) It is in the works.

Your third paragraph is what made me smile so much. You are so very right and spot on and I love it. Thank you so much for mentioning the flowers that were linked to his feelings. He is in deep with Hermione and Astoria would never compare, which is exactly what his dream showed in the beginning. He could care for her, but caring for someone is not the same as love. :(

You give me wonderfully thought out comments. Thank you so very much for sharing them with me. Truly, I love it.

The next chapter is awaiting validation as I write this. I'm so excited for it because Hermione dives into the book deeper and we see what happens with Blaise's offer.

Thank you so very much for your repeated reviews. And I'm pretty sure that I read a comment of yours on another unmentionable site, using quotes from this chapter. If that was you, your comments on blood status were right on again. We are so on the same page. :) If it wasn't you, then ignore what I just said. Haha.

I hope you enjoy the next chapter...
My heart thanks you,
Dark Whisper



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