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Review:Jchrissy says:
Ahh this might be my favorite one so far. I really love your portrayal of Molly. The ever caring, strong as an ox, but with a temper able to strike, Molly. She's so perfect, and I just want to tell her now that someday it will all be worth it. Someday, not anytime soon, it will be worth it and everyone she's about to lose, will have been lost all to finally end this.

Blah. You're killing me with feels.

I love that you didn't leave Molly out. It's not fair of them to want her to be incredible involved, because she has five babies to care for, but I can see how she'd want to be in enough to know what's going on and have her door open to those who need health or healing.

You've done such a remarkable job at making her feel anything but ease about this, and how could she! Look what is happening, what kind of mother would ever become part of something like this without some serious second guessing. She really is such a strong character, and you highlighted that beautifully.

Great installment!

Jami

Author's Response: I always get nervous when people read the previous chapter and express their relief that I'm not including Molly in this...only to realize she's the next chapter. So, that being said, I'm really glad you liked it. Molly is seriously one of my favorite characters in the series. She is such a strong, fierce woman who has this deep desire to protect and nurture. I love that about her.

The feels! I wish I could do the little heart symbol but it never works for me, so know I was thinking about putting it there.

See, my thoughts on this are that yes, Molly has young children at home and she's not going to go running out to get herself killed. I love the idea of her being that person that would patch the injured up, though, and as she's so motherly, she'd be perfect!

I really didn't want her to go into this so willingly. She does have a lot to think about - especially her family and what they're doing is dangerous, as she's seen with her brothers, but it's like...in the end, she knows what she has to do, you know? And that's what is important.

Thank you again for all your wonderful reviews. You're awesome. :)


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