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Review:Jchrissy says:
Bah. Bah. Bah. Too many feels!!! I was creeping on online people at TGS, and ended up here, and bah!! This was so amazing. The style, the imagery, the feeling! feelings!!! Oh my gosh I wanted to drown in them! She's Luna, our Luna that we know from the books but there is just so much to her. The inserts of parentheses to really make those thoughts stand out, the use of stylistics to give that repetition with red and 'if I die' bahhh!!

This is really, really wonderful and I think you've succeeded a great deal in writing something different. Thank you so much for sharing this gorgeous, tragic, heartbreaking, loving creation.


Author's Response: hahaha it's always good to creep people at TGS haha. I'm really happy you found this old baby - she's two years old? I always have trouble reading my old work, but I'm so happy you liked it. I really wanted to stray away from the crazy girl-Luna everyone's so adamant on portraying. I wanted to give her depth, sorrow and pain. Because you don't really just walk away from your mother's death. It sticks. And that's what the mantra of red, red, red was supposed to portray.

I'm so happy you liked it! Thanks so much for telling me and reviewing, it really means a lot!

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