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Review:WeasleyTwins says:
Hello! I'm here with a quick review since you responded to my status!

I like the idea that you're using Shakepeare's Hamlet as a frame for your story. I used to just abhor Shakespeare, but have found a hesitant love for him recently, so it was nice to see a bit of fanfiction concerning our good ol' bard. Your big paragraphs of description are also nice, I only wish you had kept them constant throughout the chapter!

One of the main things I would suggest is getting a beta - it would help with some of the typos/grammatical errors that I saw throughout the chapter. I know that grammar and the like aren't everyone's forte, so getting a beta would definitely clear things up. Also if you have questions about plot, characterization, description, dialogue, etc., a beta is a lovely resource for critiquing your work.

Overall, I think you've got a great idea here!

Shelby

Author's Response: Hey, I'm glad you liked it!
I'll request a beta on the forums, thanks for pointing that out.
Thanks for reviewing! :)


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