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Review:MAURAUDERGIRL<3 says:
Okay well i just finished! Wow is all i can say! It really was super good, i loved it! Im so upset its over, i could keep on reading so i do hope you write another story :-D
I loved the characters and the story plot, because my worry is always thag james nd lily stories always have the same idea and can be very repetative.. But i really loved yours :-) i loved the bit with the fake james it was really origional, and that you gave peters point of view through it all as i sed cause no ones ive read have done that.
The proposal was amazing, i loved the way he did it, i coukd feel the emotion and see it happening vividly in my mind! He asked her at the perfect moment!

Author's Response: Aww! Yay! :D I've began to plan my end-of-year-story, so I think it's safe to say I will definitely write. :P I've also found some of my original scenes from White Flags that I excluded (mostly from early on) so I might add those at some point too. :)
Thank you. I really wanted to highlight the fact that it is a war and things aren't always as they seem (in this case 'James').
I was stressing over the proposal - I had James doing it in all sorts of ways and then this scene popped into my head and it was so perfect for the two of them that I just had to write it, and I have to admit, the idea of throwing their love in Voldemort's face was too good to resist. :P
Thank you so much for the review!
Bye for now!
MarauderLover7.


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