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Review:FallenAmaranth says:
Ooh, this is exciting!

I love the characterization in this, both Ron and Hermione were in character, and Rose acted and thought exactly like an eleven year old would, she was very curious! I loved the fact that the story was told from the point of view of a young Rose, it was unusual, but brilliant and unique. I loved how she worried about them breaking up, and even referred to her friend's parents' relationship - this was very 'in character' for a young girl upon hearing her parents arguing.

It's very well written, but could do with a few grammar checks to be perfect! The description is good considering it's written in first person, and it's often hard to get everything in, as the person may not survey every single aspect of a curtain(or something) especially not an eleven year old.

Good job! It's off to Chapter 2 for me ;)

~Emily

Author's Response: Hey, I'm glad you think the characterisation is good, never wrote from a Next gen P.O.V before.
This is in the middle of being beted, so that should help.
Thanks for reviewing! :)

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