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Review:luvdobby26 says:
Hey, here with the review swap :)

This was really good! I love how it's set in St Mungo's, I've never read any set there before... actually I have, but I didn't really enjoy it, so I think that put me off, but this made me see a whole new side to them. I would to work there, it would be so cool to see all the weird injuries... ok, now I'm just rambling :/

Now to the review stuff :)

The plot is very interesting so far. But because it's so short I can't really comment on that. I'm looking foreward to see how it develops :)

I love your take on the characters. Lucy is very different to how I would imagine her, but I like her all the same. I like the others too, they seem very interesting :)

The flow and pace are excellent! Really well done!
And the writing is bril! No spelling or grammar mistakes that I could see (or remember), so a good chapter all round!

The only thing I would say though is to try and make it a little longer. I know it's the first chapter (mine are always short, sometime shorter than this so I'm one to talk!), but we didn't get to see much of wahts going on. Try and work on that and I would give you a 10/10 :)

9/10 and an add to favouites. Keep up the great writing! Well done! :)

~ Eilidh x

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Eilidh, I feel like my review's a little rubbish compared to yours, lol. I think because Percy's her dad most people would assume she's a bookworm but people aren't exactly like their parents. It was only short because it was an intro but the other chapters should be much longer than that ;) I really loved Love Story :D

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