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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
WHOA.

This was really good! For a first chapter, it's definitely a brilliant start to your hpff career- assuming there will be one ;D

Scarlett seems interesting. I don't know why but characters with dyed hair always fascinate me- it makes them seem a lot more quirky and 'badass'!! It's such an original idea as well- I sort of want to write it myself and see waht I could come up with :P A girl who hardly ages? It's kind of freaky!

One thing I'd say is that the sentences are all a bit mashed together- I'd shorten them a lot and add more description in. It would add more depth to you writing and characters!

But this was a fab start. I'm glad I stopped by
:D

~Annon

Author's Response: :O that review...made me just want to smile!!! Thank you so much, and yup i know many grammar mistake and sentances mashed together buttt i have a wonderful Beta now heehee
but thanks so much!


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