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Review:adluvshp says:
Hello! This is AditiDraco95 from the forums with your challenge review (I am reading and reviewing all the challenge entries before I judge them).

I have to say, this was a powerful piece of writing. In just a few words, you conveyed quite a lot. I liked your characterization of Sirius - his emotions were very tangible throughout the story. I liked the imagery you used - subtle yet effective. The ending was very fitting too, it leaves an impact on the reader. I loved your title absolutely as well!

Your narrative and flow worked well too and all in all, I liked reading this story. I liked how you worked with my challenge guidelines and created this story.

Good work!

Best of luck for the challenge results, I shall notify you once I release them :)

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hi Aditi!!!

I'm so happy you liked this, I was concerned about the length, but 500 word challenges always push me to really add a lot in to a little bit of room.

I just think that at this point Sirius was a wreck of a person, nothing about him was clear, and he just wanted to believe that they were alive.

Gah. Why did JKR take them from me?? WHY??

Okay, fan rant over.. thanks for such an awesome challenge ♥


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