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Review:adluvshp says:
Hello! This is AditiDraco95, here with the challenge review. (I am reading and reviewing all the challenge entries before I judge them).

This is a neat story you've got here. I liked the air of mystery you maintained throughout the narrative, it intrigued me and urged me to read more. The way you have described Caradoc is good too, his Gryffindor courage and pride, and his need for revenge growing as the story progressed. I liked your characterizations of the Death Eaters too with the little insight you gave into them. The little details such as shoving a muggle on their way added to their characters. The ending was very fitting indeed, and I liked your idea of finishing it off with a news report.

There were a few grammar mistakes here and there, but not major enough to distract me, so all's well there.

Over all, I liked reading this story, and I think it was very much in line with my challenge guidelines.

Good work!

Best of luck for the challenge results, I shall notify you once I release them!

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hey! Sorry it's taken me so long to get around to responding to this. I sat down today, noticed my unanswered reviews, and was like 'yikes!'

I'm glad you like the story. I still can't believe it came third in your challenge, even though it was months ago now. It's crazy.

I'm aware it needs editing, but at the moment it's just about finding the time. :/

Thanks again for the review, and I'm super glad you liked the story!

- Adele :)

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