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Review:adluvshp says:
Wow this was an amazing story! You have written this very beautifully in such a haunting manner.

Astoria's emotions, her guilt, her pain, it was so tangible throughout the story. Her relationship with Draco was portrayed beautifully as well, and I liked how in the end he set everything right for her.

The ending was just chilling, with your powerful imagery. I could see Astoria burning her childhood home and 'dancing' with joy at it, it was a very suited ending.

You definitely have a way with words - nothing could have described your plot and scenario better than your narration.

I loved Astoria and Draco's characterizations, and I really liked reading the story overall. It touched me deeply and I was totally into it.

You have done an impeccable job with this. Great work!

10/10

Cheers!
AD

Author's Response: Yay I'm so happy you liked this story!! Haunting was probably the best word you could have used, because the entire time I was just plagued by this image of a tiny ten year old with eyes that have seen way too much.

It was really important for me to let my narration overpower the lyrics, and let them simply guide the story, so I'm thrilled to hear that it felt that way to you!!

Thanks so much for this absolutely lovely review ♥


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