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Review:ValWitch21 says:
Heya!

I had to blink once or twice, just to make sure you really did have another chapter up! I loved this chapter - get used to that sentence, you'll be hearing it quite often!

Ooooh, so it starts! I can't wait for the next chapter...

I absolutely adored your portrayal of Rose. She just fits the image I have of her - not wanting to be helpless, I think, sums her up as Ron and Hermione's daughter and the way I've always imagined her. Nothing to say here.

Albus - loved him, duh. Just wondering though: his best friends are one slightly reckless boy and a smart girl. Is that done on purpose or did it just develop out as such? The similarities with his father are interesting in any case.

More Nathalie around in the next chapter? Perfect.


You'll be seeing me around! :)

Author's Response: Me too! I found it so ironic that you reviewed right when I was almost finished with the next chapter, so this was definitely a treat for you :p Same... I haven't even started it yet, but I know already it's going to be epic and a challenge and I can't wait for you to read it.

Thank you! Some people kind of write Rose as evil or something but I do honestly like her and I think out of the four she's most like me, so yeah, glad you still like her! Albus is adorable and I love him in every story so I definitely wanted to do him justice in this :D

Dang. I knew there was something off about Claire and Jem - it wasn't until you pointed it out that I realised that they were kind of like Ron and Hermione :p I can say, however, that it just developed that way, but I do hope that they won't turn out too much like the trio because I'll probably butcher them :)

Thanks again for reviewing, and see you around next time!

--Linn


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