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Review:lia_2390 says:
I love how you introduced your characters! From a look in to Rose's work life and the obvious conflict it creates with her family, to Al's girl problems, and the wicked old lady who lives down the stairs, and who can forget - Joseph Heart. Each of them are parts of Rose's life, and all of them are very different people with their own personalities and issues which you've hinted at.

Looking back at the prologue, I really like the way in which this story progresses. It's like something I would see in an action movie, and I think it's brilliant. Another thing I liked was the excerpts from the book. In a way, you're telling a story within a story (storception - sorry, I had to). You're telling us how Krum slowly unravelled over the years instead of leaving it for one chapter where he blurts out everything. I only saw one author do that before.

I really enjoyed this chapter!


Lia

Author's Response: Thank you, Lia. I'm glad you liked the first few chapters. Most of the story will be about Krum and Rose's relationship, but I thought it was important to get a sense of who Rose is as a person through her job and her family before jumping right into the romance.

And I'm so glad you liked the clips of the book. I had the same thought: the reader needs to know this information but having Krum spew all this at Rose would not an interesting story make!

Thanks again for the R&R. I do love these review swaps!


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