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Review:PhoenixPulse says:
Favorite'd.

Honestly, I am lost for words. This story was so wonderfully written and I love Luna in this. Many times people forget that Luna has a different side to her, a side that usually is overshadowed by her crazy and humorous beliefs. We forget she's capable of deeper feelings and sensitivity. I applaud you for showing this side of her. It's remarkable.

The parts with her mother is so bitterly sweet. I can imagine it perfectly playing in my head, a little girl gardening with her mother, one moment she's there, the next, she's gone. You captured their mother-daughter relationship wonderfully, and it really touched my heart.

The Harry/Luna ship! This was honestly the first story I've read for this shipment, and I was really impressed. I love Luna's persistance, and Harry feels so very much real. He sticks with his character, and their relationship in this was just so lovely!

I just don't know what else to say. Your work has caught me utterly breathless. I can't even explain how to rate your story it's that amazing. A 10/10 wouldn't be fair, because it deserves way more than that.

P.S.:
And don't worry about it being typical or mainstream, because it wasn't. It was far from it. When some people right romance, sometimes its easy to see the correlations. In this, I can't find anything mainstream about it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so happy you liked this. And caught onto so many things? I really wanted to portray Luna and her mother's relationship. And Harry. Harry kind of just came naturally. He's a darling and Luna's... Luna is Luna and very messed up at that. But so is Harry, so they're kind of messed up together and that makes them kind of perfect.

I'm so happy you liked this. it's been two years since I wrote this and I really hate rereading my own stories since I think I've improved a lot since then. But this just makes me very very happy. So thank you so much for letting me know. Thank you.


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