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Review:Saga says:
I'm very happy the chapter wasn't longer but that's only because if I read another sentence I would start to cry. Seriously.

One thing that made me happy however was that neither Victoire nor Dominique acted like a bitch in this story. Both of them were actually really sweet, I like that. :)

I would love to have at least part of the next chapter in Al's POV... poor Al. :'( It would be interesting to hear some of his thoughts of this whole situation.

And Ron, I am very proud of you. Did he tell Hermione that he wrote a letter to Scorpius when he "said something sweet" or did he say something else? I can really imagine Ron say, a little to loud "I wonder who that could be?" with a fake puzzled look on his face. By the way, when I read that I was just like: "It could be SCORPIUS!" :D

Just wondering, was Claire there? (Haha, Claire there, it rhymes! ^-^) Because I don't think you mentioned her and I thought she would be there and well... it would be nice if she was. :3

Lastly, it would be... exciting if some death eaters showed up at the Burrow, maybe on new years eve and Allie and Al realise who they want to protect more than anyone else. Alice can't just get over Albus so she'll better understand that soon or I'll have to wait for ever for them to get back together and I don't want to do that.


Please, please update soon! ~Saga

Oh, I forgot, I think you're really good with names! :) For example I can imagine a Bulgarian woman being called Ana, although I'm not an expert at Bulgarian names. :/

Author's Response: Just so you know; your review made my day. Just saying.
Firstly, I never liked the really bitchy or stuck up family members. I understand that families, even huge families have issues, but I didn't like the huge drama that ensued, so I decided that they should be pretty nice.
Secondly, I don't know exactly how I'm going to write the next chapter. Al's POV sounds like a good idea, so I might do that. I really don't think ahead very much, which I should. I tend to make mistakes because of that; like leaving Claire out... oops. I'll fix it, don't worry.
Thirdly, I DO have the general idea for the last few chapters and HINT: something exciting WILL happen.
Finally, I make sure to look up names for all ethnicities. I want it to be as authentic as possible.
Thanks for your review! I'll try to update super soon.


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