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Review:PygmyPuffLover says:
hellooo :) so yes, this story ended up being read second out of everything on my insanely long list of things to read. i love it, darling. seriously ~ the way you write just has natural humour. the way you put sentences together - really, i'm shocked. it's so entertaining to read. i tried to write in the way you do once, and gave up after three days of only writing a page.

okay, characters so far - potter irks me. he hasn't really done anything wrong (aside from destroying the kitchen) but he still irks me. he's just too chill. blargh. ian is a doll. love him. he's just a little babe, with his minging little swear patch. hm... malfoy? i like. i like him a lot. i just think he's a sweetie. charlotte seems off the rails ~ but i felt really sorry for her when she didn't make prefect. clearly it meant a lot to her.

right! onto the next chapter :D

ellie :) xx

Author's Response: hey there ellie! :)

wowie thanks so much. im really glad you enjoyed it!

Ohmygod thank you for the lovely compliments about my writing, i'm flattered! Purleaaase you have your own supa-summer-and-james-amazing-style-of writing.

Haha potty doesn't need to do anything wrong, his existence is enough :D That's one of the reasons charlie dislikes him too. I mean who actually likes chill people? phwoaar not me, that's for sure.

Haha he's like a lost puppy, isn't he? A very mucky, sweaty puppy.

Ohhho interesting. you like the malf? He's a lil' bit of sweetie too :D

Very accurate there. She is off the rails, completely gone.

Thanks for the lovely review ellie! xox

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