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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
I decided to do this one for our review swap as I've never really read fouders before so I thought that this would be fun and different to read and I was right! I loved it! I'm always nervous about reading founders fics as I can't stand story's with long words that nobody uses any more and this chapter didn't have any of those so that made me rather happy. Also your description in this chapter was wonderful as well and loved the playfulness that was tied in at the ending. For a beginning, this did a great job getting me really interested in your story and wanting to read more of it (which I just might have to if I have time). It was fun to read and just flowed really well. The pacing was also wonderful. I think that you have done a good job capturing the different founders as well, Slytherin being the git thinking he is better than everybody else but also very distrusting of everyone, Ravenclaw the smart one always thristing knowledge, Gryffindor is certaintly courageous by getting wands during a time that it is punishable, and Hufflepuff is the loving type who keeps everyone on task and diffuses the tension. It was very enjoyable! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the swap! I'm so glad you decided to review this, and that you enjoyed it!

I did try to make it easy to read and accessible (I totally know what you mean about the confusing Old English stuff), so I'm glad it came across that way. And that ending scene is one of my favorites in the whole story so far (I just have to laugh at the image of Salazar as a cat), and I'm so happy it gets you interested in reading the rest!

I worked hard to get the characters right, and to keep them true to what their houses represent. They each have an important place to fill in the foursome, and I'm so glad you saw that :)

Thanks again for coming by! I'm glad you had fun reading this, and I hope you get a chance to read on sometime!

--Maggie


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