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Review:peppersweet says:
pssst Petra is also a fab name. like Maud or Hercule or something. we need a fancy old-fashioned names revival. Petra is just the start.

I love this little assembly of people. baww baww bawww they are so cute, I would like to keep them on my bookshelf for a rainy day. (again, this review may as well have been sleep-talked for all the sense it makes)

Albus dusting his trousers this boy is just too precious can I keep him

(PSST, FERN, 'TIS A ZIPWIRE Y'KNOW) I actually really like that little passage. this fic is all kind of ~existentialist angst~ but in a light and floaty way - kind of hard to explain, but the atmosphere is just perfect here and I am feelin' it (except saying I'm feelin' it makes it seem a bit silly when it isn't)

how did I ever pass english literature with such fine literay criticism as this? then again, there were no Albuses in the books I studied at school. wish there had been.

(teeny wee nitpick - there are a couple of tense confusions here and there, like in the sentence beginning 'as I rushed hurriedly to class' but that is alll)

hugs for Petra. owwh this fic is the perfect mix of sad and happy, like...floatiness with pathos.

ohnonono I like my stories serious now and again. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this, and I hope you update soon! :D ♥

Author's Response: is it really? well I came up with her name while putting some petroleum jelly on my chapped lips so I thought of Petro..and then Petra.

yup. I'm just that cool&creative. (and weird)

Thankyou! :D bleckh I wish I could make a heart but I dunno how you do it. the crocodile sign with the three ain't working.

I WANT A RAINY DAY. it rains, like, once in a purple moon where I live. Also, I'm honoured my characters have a place on your bookshelf.

ah, tenses D: my weakness, specially at three in the morning when I wrote it. no worries I'll go over it when I get the time.

omg no don't say that! :3 there's a lot more of sad to come..and happy too. but I shall not ruin it for you - plus I think I've given too much away. but if you like seriousness...then that's awesome.

I hope I can update soon but don't kill me if winter comes before I do, I'm supah busy. Sorry for the late reply and thanks a million!!


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