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Review:caoty says:
So it took me forever to get around to this because honestly life's been hectic & I completely forgot. I'm a terrible person. Thanks for being so polite about it, btw.

I really like what you've done with Sirius' pov. You've shown his resilience and sense of humour well even in the darkest times, which is sometimes compromised in fic, so well done there. (Personally I'd have had more of a mention of Remus... but then, I am a Wolfstar shipper.)
It's realistic without being depressing, which is something I could never do. I tip my hypothetical hat to you, madam/sir/[honourific of your choice].

There were a couple of missed apostrophes, maybe too many semi-colons where you could have used brackets or dashes just to keep it interesting, other nitpicky things like that, so watch out for them.

All in all, I reckon I'll keep an eye out for this fic and the others you write. :)

Author's Response: Awesome, thank you so much! I know life can be hectic so I didn't see any reason to be rude about it lol. Resilience, that's a word I haven't seen yet in reviews, but yes, it's very true :) You're absolutely right! I didn't think about Remus :O When I go about editing/elongating this story, and I will eventually, I'll definitely mention Remus more, I mean he is the one that's still alive, and after he escapes from Hogwarts wouldn't he maybe stay with him a little while to figure out where he's going?? Oh, you've definitely got me thinking again about the little things, thank you so much for the review, it was well worth the wait :)

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