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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Aw! I thought that this was super cute! I thought that your characters were fun and sweet and loved how Roxanne was kind of playing double agent between the two. I love the idea of the vision Mia saw was of her marrying James and that kind of in turn gets him to ask her out. The only thing I would suggest for this oneshot is where James first admits to liking Mia I would have a pause between the rest of the sentence and when he admits it. That would then come across as nervousness and such though its not absolutely needed. Really, I thought this was a sweet oneshot and just really cute and I found myself enjoying it very much! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

I love the characters of this one shot! I love Roxanne, and in my head she is super boisterous and unable to be contained, so it only made snese she would be a double agent!

Thanks so much for the suggestion! I'll be sure to look at that part!

Thanks for reviewing!

~Cassie


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