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This was a really great story! I've always been a bit curious about the founders. J.K.Rowling never told us anything much about them. so i think this was a good idea to write about them!
First of all, I liked Godric's characterization. his dream made me laugh ;) i am glad you have Jacqueline in your story because a story needs a bit of romance.
Rowena was even better than Godric. a smart, brave young woman who is a princess! wow i was impressed. I also loved the way you connected the founders. i mean, the three of them. I can't wait to know about Helga!
But i think this story needs editing. this has nice theme and all, but can you make it a little shorter? this has kind of unnecessary explanations. this may bore some readers. first chapter is important for every story. It must be catching and interesting. the starting with the dream was great but when Godric wakes up, the story seems boring. so make it shorter.
otherwise, this was a nice first chapter! think about my suggetion. i just want this story to be better! so don't be angry!
Keep writing!
Ashwini :)

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