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Review:LittleMissPrincess says:
oh.
my.
god.
you did NOT just do that.
...
BUT YOU DID!
ooo YOU DEMON!

okay.
lets start from the top, shall we?

Albus' stuck in the pandorica
fauna might be dead,
and scorpius is a roman with a gun inside his hand,
seems like things aren't going as planned.

okay joke ^
(clears throat)
i love how she had a time table for her own life and stuff, its all very cute and flora-ish. as i said last chapter, hooray for scorpius and everyone being happy again.
i absolutely LOVED the part with albus telling her about the inside out jacket thing(:

scorpius getting into a fight?
whats this witchcraft?
but him being all awkward going into her dormy - i KNEW fauna would find them-PINKY SWEAR!
i just knew it.
and then all the problems came pouring out, and everything is so sad and oh :(
and then, and then, scorpius is being a poo head, and then flora cant take it, and she gets mad as well, bringing up that dark, dark time and then FAUNA heard everything! :O
they mentioned the kiss, and, when she said that scorpius probably didn't even like her - she heard that too!
ugh, angst.

you evil, sneaky writer.
biscuit?

im just, hsjadfi lshf this is a really good fic, im so happy im decided to invest my time in this all those months ago(:

also, there's this really adorable boy WHO IS SUCH A SCORPIUS in my highschool. now wait, lemme explain, he's not like a regular scorpius, HE'S LIKE A YOUR TYPA SCORPIUS. as in, he has asthma, he's awkward, he's a hipster and he's in the choir with me. HE RESEMBLED THE CHARACTER THAT YOU WROTE. IT WAS SO CRAZY. i needed to tell somebody badly, but then i realized that no one would know what i was talking about, so then i was like, okay, i guess i'll just tell pepperweet...

yeah...
OKAY SO LOVELY STORY, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! YOUR WORKING? COOLBEANS.
OKAYBYE(:
hana

Author's Response: holy hippogriffs this is one of the best reviews I've had in a long time

so let's recap-
1. Albus is a madman with a box (and he wears a bow tie now, bow ties are cool)
2. Fauna is a kissogram?
3. Of course Scorpius is Rory, I really can't fault you there.

Oh ho ho ho ho don't worry this isn't the last you'll see of Scorpius and...fight club. Yeah. Scorpius joined fight club. Except he can't talk about it. Plot twist: Scorpius is Tyler Durden.

angst. no biscuits. only angst.

heh, I'm glad you decided to invest your time in it too! I'm nothing without my loyal (and often hilariously mad) readers!

awww, RL Scorpius! I've met a couple in my time (and seeing as I base all my scorpii on my own lame self I guess I meet Scorpius every day). There's a total Scorpius in my history of art lectures. When Byzantine mosaics get a bit too boring I have a habit of drawing random people about me and the other day I drew him, and I was like 'this could basically be a character study for my fic'. Anwyay yeah.

update should be on the way! I have a lot of the next chapter written already :)

thanks for the review! ♥


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