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Review:PhoenixPulse says:
Okay, I feel awful for not leaving reviews for your previous chapters. This story is absolutely AMAZING. I've never read anything like this yet, and the concept of it all is just so unique and intriguing.

I feel bad for Molly, the poor girl. Her luck seems to be at an all-time-low, and I don't think her luck has improved by the bit. And I love how she met Moth. Their new friendship is so awkward, but adorable too, and I really feel they'll end up getting closer throughout the story.

My Favorite Line:
"Sadly, my hand hit a muscled chest. In my surprise, my hand froze so it appeared that I was… stroking his chest. Really? Really? Okay Molly, slowly remove the hand. I ordered myself. Molly! Listen to me! Remove the hand, now. No! What are you doing! Stop fondling his chest! STOP IT! What are you doing?!"

That was the best ever. Honestly, this story had me in stitches the whole time, and I honestly laughed my head off. I favorited, by the way. I just love your style, especially with humor. I guess I ought to go move on to chapter five now!

Author's Response: Hi!

Oh! Don't worry about that :) I took long enough to reply! :P Awk - thank you SO much. Your reviews really made my day and I had to force myself from writing the next chapter right away. :D

Molly is quite simply an awkward person - she doesn't fully get social rules and kind of tumbles through life. Moth is slightly the opposite, so their friendship is just random and awkward! :D

Thank you, Thank you, Thank you for reading my story, reviewing on this and the next chapter.. and favouriting!

Keira :)

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