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Review:JessiesGirl says:
Hey, it's JessiesGirl (Katherine) here for the review swap. So I was skimming through your authors page wondering which story to choose and then I saw this and couldn't resist taking a look as I am a self-confessed Dramione nut.

I don't think I've ever come across a Draco/Hermione fic before where both partys haven't been in it. The fact that Draco's voice is only present through the epistolary style creates an air of ambiguity that I find quite interesting on the whole. It's a very defferent approach to what I'm used to. I also like the fact that you have opted to tell this story from the point of view of Rose. Considering she's just a child it throws quite an innocent perspective onto this sordid secret that Malfoy apparently had which I personally find to be quite refereshing. Good choice! Also, I really liked the fact that I as a reader was made to feel completely omnipotent in the respect that at one point during the story (upon reading the letter) I knew more about the goings on than any other character.

Your writing style on the whole is very good although there were one or two moments where I did feel as though things could have been worded better.

Your character of Ron and Hermione were both very much spot on so kudos for that. Overall a very nice read. Well done!

- Katherine

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reviewing! :)
I'm glad you liked it and I'm in the middle of getting it bete'd so hopefully it will be better after that.
Thanks again for reviewing! :)

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