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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
I thought that this was rather sweet and liked the take on it. I think your idea here is rather interesting and different that they didn't get together for another two years after the war and then end up pregnant after only a short amount of time. I think your characterization is pretty good and I am interested to see where you plan on taking the story. I only found a couple of small errors in this chapter and it was here, "That was a small part of the reason he hadn't did his Auror training with Harry." did should be done. And here, "You work to hard" to should be too. Other than those small mistakes I couldn't spot any other errors so great job on that. I think you had Ron's reaction pretty realistic, being a little shocked at first but still wanting to be with her no matter what. Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reviewing! :)
I'm glad you liked it and I'll go back and fix the errors when I edit it!
Thanks again for reviewing! :)


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