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Review:Ron 4 Hermione says:
This is great, I really hope you continue it! :)
I thought the charactersation was great, Ron is great and I hope he and Harry stay supportive. Hermione seems a little OOC but since she is pregnant I think it fits nicely. Draco, hmm we only saw him for a little bit but I already think he's up to something- that may just be me being biased becasue he isn't my favourite character! :P
I love the plot idea, especially since the dad is a muggle, it's not something you see a lot.
I didn't notice any mistakes so good job, and this is a really good start to what could be an amazing story!
10/10

Author's Response: I am hoping to continue writing this, I've just gotten a bit distracted with a bunch of other plot bunnies that have made their way into my brain and felt the need to be written right away! I'm so glad that you like my Harry and Ron. I wanted this to be a bit different from normal. I can honestly see Hermione wanting to be normal just one night with her muggle boyfriend prodding her along that road and then things just get out of hand. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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