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Review:manno_malfoy says:
Hi there! I'm here with your requested review and I deeply apologise for taking such a long time to come here! Madness has ensued in my life...

Anyway. What a way to drive things away from Cliche Land! Usually, enemies being locked up together end up falling for each other or their hatred toward each other might soften a little... Honestly, that's what I was expecting! And I'll take a wild guess and say that you did this on purpose! You kept on making us believe that this is what's going to happen. I mean, a walk? What a perfect way for them to chat up and get to know each other! Therefore, I really was taking by surprise!

I still adore the way you write Narcissa! You seem to know her so well that she remains consistent and very canon-like as the story goes on. I also believe that your Lucius, especially in this chapter, has been very believable. The way he talked and the way he managed to achieve exactly what he needed to achieve... It's just so like him.

I'm sort of sad this chapter ended so soon, but I think you've chosen an optimum point to stop at. It leaves me intrigued, wondering how she's going to deal, who's going to help her... It's yet another chapter ending with a gripping cliffie.

I cannot wait to see what's going to happen in the next chapter. Well done!

-Manno

Author's Response: Please don't apologize! I myself have been unable to respond to my recent reviews because of life. I completely understand where you are coming from.

Thank you for taking the time to read my story. I find your reviews so inspirational and look forward to more of them! xx


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