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Review:bester_jester says:
Another good chapter. Just a tip: jumping between the POVs several times in one chapter can make the story a bit difficult to follow. How about only changing POV once?

Also, what is the history between Draco and L? Why are they so interested in each other this year of all years?

I love the way Voldemort speaks to Draco, it's really interesting.

Author's Response: thank you knowing people like my story really keeps me motivated.

ok thanks, im not very good at writing with POV, so now i know. i will try to only change POV once:)

draco's liked L since fourth year. and L kinda always liked draco but this year her feelings started to grow.

i think so to:)

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