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Review:Cassie Whitmann says:
Great story here. I haven't read anything Astoria before, but I love what you've done with this story.

I very much enjoyed the web you created with your characters, it reminds me very much of the Black family. One member is cast out of the family, and two remain.

I always find it interesting how people portrait the different points of views during the battle. However interesting, they all eventually become the same; character is torn between staying and leaving underage or not, slips grasp of friend, stays to fight. You've added something however, that I have yet to see: after the decision. It's always written after that an epic battles ensues, and, well I'm sure you know the rest, but what you've added is something unique that I've only seen in this story. And it worked.

Surely other things had to have been going on in the castle at the time, and I could imagine that some people would use the battle as a cover to inflict injury on others. You've got it here, and so I must say, well done! This is a great story!

Author's Response: I'd never thought about the Black family parallel, actually, but that's interesting, and I can see why you would - there is a sense of two v. one, isn't there?

Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you liked this story! :)

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