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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
"Sure, Ron would never be the perfect boyfriend, he would never sing to her, he would never be the most romantic person in the world but he was Ron." I love this bit! I thought it was so sweet and very true that while I can't see Ron being super romantic, he is still him and thats all that matters when it comes to a relationship, the person not what they can buy you or do for you.

With this sentence, " It was insufferable, she though of all the times they had, had together" though should be thought. But other than this one small mistake, I didn't notice anything else.

One thing I really like about this oneshot is that she doesn't get revenge, she just kind of takes it in stride and knows that she missed her chance. I also like that you do show Hermione and Ginny's friendship so that it's not just her and Harry and Ron which is also nice to see as I imagine those two girls are pretty close from all the times that Hermione has gone over to the Burrow and such! Really I thought this was a great oneshot about Hermione and how she felt after Ron and Lavender get together. I had never really thought about how Hermione might blame herself for the whole thing being that she helped get Ron on the Quidditch team.. really interesting! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Hi!
Thank you, I truly believe that it is the person not what you gain that makes it and Ron growing up with such a loving family lacking in money would be like that.

I'll edit that right now, thank you for pointing it out. :)

I could never see her taking revenge, the birds were just an outburst of anger which everyone is entitled to. Exactly! it is pretty canon as well. Thank you. :)

I am glad you enjoyed it.
Emma


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