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Review:Ginny45 says:
Hi :)
I am a huge fan of Bellatrix and you have done her justice. I also adore one-shots and how much you can convey in them but you still get to hold back information. Something you just can't do with longer stories.

I love this little snippet of her life, it really adds to the character we saw so little of in the series. I love the way they acting around each other it was very realistic and well executed.

The descriptions were amazing but at the same time they were concise.You didn't topple into over describing which would have taken away the lovely pacing.
Emma

Author's Response: Hello! Thanks for tagging me :)

I'm so glad you liked this, especially being a big Bellatrix fan! It's great that you found her interaction with Voldemort realistic and that you felt like I added to her canon characterization. It's usually my goal with characters to add new flavor to what I know, flavor that will fit in and make sense with canon. Also, I'm SO glad you mentioned imagery: I've been working lately on not letting my descriptions take over, but merely to allow them to enhance a piece. It really makes me feel good to hear that you felt like they didn't overpower the plot or disrupt the flow.

Thanks for your wonderful review :)

-Amanda


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