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Review:Prongs Rides says:
I'm really getting into this. The writing is engaging and easy to read, as always. And, as always, I'm a huge fan of how incredibly fast you turn chapters out.

You've done a great job of developing a lot of characters quickly. We got a lot more of depth for Remus, Dorcas, and Peter without it seeming forced. Nice.

I'm a big fan of Remus so far. Consistent with his personality from the books w/o being predictable.

I still feel like I know the other characters better than James and Lily, and am still intrigued by that.

Lots of good lines in this chapter. My favorites:

"No, he was perfectly right you are stunning. I'm glad my son hasn't fallen for someone of less than decent taste." He released her hand. "It was nice to meet you."

"If you're going to fight." She reasoned, "You should fight for something." Peter and Sirius frowned, but Remus and James understood perfectly. James raised his sword, "I FIGHT FOR HONOR!"



"When in doubt Wormy," James snickered as he walked up. "Remember that either way you're going to hurl."

"I'm going to be a better friend than I was a boyfriend," He promised as he pulled her into another hug.

Author's Response: I tried to write as fast as I can whenever I get ideas. James and Lily will progress more slowly then the other characters because their story takes longer than everyone else's. I'm so glad you liked those lines! The James one reminds me of my best friend. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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