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Review:PhoenixPulse says:
Yay! I'm first to review! :D

Anywho, let's get down to the gist. This is by far a really strong start, and I can't help but wonder where this will go. I'm surprised when Ginny walked out on Mione, because she's always strong willed and hard-headed till the end. Neville too.

I suppose Draco's actions can be sensible, seeing how the war must've affected him hard as well. I mean, the poor boy was a defected Death Eater by force, and he did watch Hermione get tortured. I just don't do Dramione. I'm sure your won't be cliched though, as the many Dramionies I have read.

Forgive me if I sound like a ranting troll. I don't mean to. I love this so far, I really do. Your story has a promising concept, and so far I am very intrigued.

I shall await your next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Don't worry, I like long reviews(: Thank you so much, by the way! You are correct with Draco and how the war affected him and that's really part of how the story will evolve. It won't be a cliche Dramione, no real romancey moments (that have been planned at least) Maybe this story will open up the Dramione fiction to you a bit more! Haha, well I promise it won't be too cliche. There will be more about Ginny and Neville leaving in upcoming chapters, this just gave an overview for an introduction.
Thanks so much, again! Really glad you like it so far!


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