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Review:Jchrissy says:
I think this was a really well written one shot! You had some seriously amazing characterizations, though I couldn't help but wonder where this leaves Bill and Fleur. Unless I missed something...

Anyway, the way you created these characters and imagery felt very real and alive, I especially liked seeing Ginny, Ron, Harry, Hermione.. all through Viktor's eyes! I see Fleur in a different way, so part of me feels like you could have gone deeper with her - but that's because I love that girl and I reminded myself that this is Viktor's story, not hers ;).

I really felt in touch with your story, like you were walking around this room and kept diffing into Viktor. You did an amazing job with kiss scene! I LOVE well done kisses and you blew that one out of the water!!!

Okay, sorry if this review felt a bit chaotic, that's kind of how my brain is right now - haha!

Wonderful story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for that! Yeah, this is kinda AU, I guess (it was a present for someone who wanted to see it done, so... I did it :P). Bill and Fleur in this universe would never have happened. Dunno who Bill would have ended up with... didn't think too much about it, lol.

Characterisation was so difficult! Hermione and Ron were easier, but Ginny was so difficult because Viktor never really met her... I'm glad you think I did all right with them, though! Yeah, Fleur could be a lot deeper, definitely, but it's a fairly frivolous one-shot, so I wanted to keep her like that to match ;)

Gosh, I hate writing kiss scenes. I don't know why I include them in things... honestly, they drive me mad trying to get them right... thanks so much for that! :)

Haha, it's fine, don't worry about it - it didn't seem chaotic at all!

Aph xx


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