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Review:academica says:
Hi! Back again! (FYI, I've found recently that it's totally fine - and quite fun - to ride the muse train!)

Hah, I love the awkward interaction between Carla and Severus! I kept thinking of the very awkward first dinner between Belle and the Beast in Beauty and the Beast during this chapter. If that's what you were going for, you got it :)

I'm not quite sure about McGonagall, though; to me, she and the other professors wouldn't want to reveal so much information to a brand new staff member, especially sensitive information like Snape being a Death Eater. However, I thought you got her mannerisms down very well.

I'm interested to see what's next for Carla and Severus - I was shocked to find out that he's so young here and she's older than he is! Interesting!

Looking forward to the next!


Author's Response: Hi! Yep, I was going for awkward haha.

And now you point out the McGonagall thing I think it's true - I'll probably go back in and edit the chapter so that there's like some gossipy girly professor that Carla can coax some info out of. :P

I don't know why I made her older than he was. I did quite a bit of research on him so that I could get the dates and age right and stuff, and I wanted it to be a little while after Lily had died so that the scars were still pretty raw.

Next chapter doesn't really involve Snape, sadly, but it is in the queue. ;)

- Ellie

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