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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there! I am finally here with your review. Sorry it has taken me so long. Real life can get in the way... a lot.

I really liked this chapter. I LOVED your description at the begining of the chapter, but it kind of seemed liked it sort of died off. Maybe it was because you were ending the chapter that I feel like this. Totally possible.

I really like the way that you characterized Lucius and Narcissa. She is this spit fire that won't tolerate him. I think it's a Black family thing. Lucius is just cold, heart less, but in a way that makes you highly intrigued. I really enjoy this cat and mouse game that they seem to be playing with one another.

I am afraid that Narcissa will get caught and that this will make her lash out more at Lucius in retaliation. I don't think she'll tell on him at all, but a woman scorned or cornered is a dangerous thing in itself. =)

Keep up the great writing!!! I look forward to what else is going to happen.


Author's Response: No worries dear, I appreciate that you took the time to read my story. I'm glad it was suspenseful for you! My goal was to end it in a way nobody expected. Can't wait to read more of your reviews!! xx

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