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Review:academica says:
Hey Jami! Here from review tag! ♥

This was adorable. I loved the comical twist you put on Lily's ever-changing mood; I can imagine a young mother's emotions swinging wildly from one to the next as she tries to decipher the meaning of her child's cries. I love James, too, trying and failing to get Lily to calm down. The ending to this was totally priceless and felt very realistic.

Nice job! :)

-Amanda

Author's Response: Hi Amanda! I am so happy you liked this, and that you found some humor in the situation, because I was seriously giggling the entire time imagining these brand new parents, barely out of school, with an infant.

I think Lily would have had a hard time realizing that when it comes to being a mother, no one can be perfect. She always has the answer, so when she can't figure out what to do with her own child, it would just really shock her.

Thanks so much for this sweet review ♥



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