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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

I told you that I would be back but I bet you weren't expecting it to be this soon, right? Surprise! I left you some questions on your MTA as well so have fun answering my questions! :D
Anyway, I'm reminded of how much I love this story with this chapter. Ciaran's torment is so unfair but I didn't think that he would attack the teacher! Although I sort of figured that Tregeagle deserved it, he shouldn't have let him get bullied so much by the Gryffindors! His anger was very well placed but what a surprise for me with that...disruption! The Wild Hunt?! Why would he have that and I must know where they went, it was such a spooky part that I wasn't sure how to handle it. I could imagine it all so well in my mind and I really don't blame Greg and the others for wanting to know more. I have a slight feeling that things won't work out so well but maybe I'm just too used to how I write my Misfits...hm. Anyway, I'll be back for the next piece! I have no complaints about anything, its simply excellent! So many secrets and lies and boy-angst! :D
P.S.: As soon as I get my laptop fixed, you'll be one of the first to know!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Ooh, I shall go and get cracking with that MTA...

This is the point where everything all starts to kick off: I had tremendous difficulty keeping everything straight in my head and tying up all the loose ends - do let me know if anything feels unresolved when you reach the finish line (or, even worse, if it all turns into a big Deus Ex Machina!)

Sheriff


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