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Review:Dany says:
Hey! I was reading your story before but some things changed and I simply didn't have time to read it anymore. I have one simple question - as i don't have time to read everything (got to chapter 10). Inform me as I want to restart reading it but want to make sure it's still worth it.

Who died or what happened in the last 2 chapters, please?

Author's Response: Well first of all thanks for coming back :3 I'll give you the entire rundown from chapter 11!

Ginny told Harry he had to get Hermione something nice for her birthday and she offered him an old magical locket that she didn't use that cycled through ten pictures. They got back to Hogwarts, yadda yadda yadda. Harry figured out that Hermione was going to be Voldemort's next target and he didn't want to tell her but Ron convinced him to. She took it well, or so he thought. Long story short, Hermione has this weird complex where she pushes her own feelings and thoughts aside in lieu of Harry's for reasons unknown; she just does. And it's self-destructive. Hermione does a little soul searching and reveals this problem, and later in the chapter (15) Harry tells her she's sorry for always putting her in compromising positions and Hermione thinks things could be different. Then it's her birthday and Harry gives her the locket and she loves it (I'd recommend reading the descriptions of the pictures in that chapter!). Then in chapter 17 Ron gives a little back story so I'd recommend reading that too. We also bring Luna into the story. Next we find out that Harry's been being a total asshole to Hermione for no reason and none of the teachers are allowing him Occlumency lessons. He then cuts off things with Hermione because he sees that he's being a total asshole. We then go back to the beginning of the previous chapter and get everything form Hermione's POV. We discover that she hides her hurt from him and goes to abandoned classes to cry and she thinks Harry hates her. Ron confronts her about it and convinces her to talk to him but like I said, he ends things with her but she thinks he has gotten sick of her. In chapter 20 Ron talks to Harry about what he and Hermione talked about in the classroom and we find out what happened back in fifth year with the window (read that too - it's important!). Harry feels awful but doesn't fix things with Hermione. More crap happens that isn't really important, except that we find out Snape and McGonagall need to know something from Harry and Hermione that neither of them know about, but it basically sends Harry over the edge and he decides to never go to sleep and study Occlumency by himself. He stays awake for five days before Hermione finally starts talking to him again and gets him to sleep and they hash things out and become friends again. Hermione messes with him and tells him she used to like him when she really didn't and Harry reveals that he used to actually have a crush on her. She feels bad and gives him a pity kiss. Harry doesn't care. More yadda yadda yadda, Ron and Luna start going out, Hermione helps Harry with Occlumency, everything is good. Then Hermione's parents get killed by Death Eaters. She completely shuts down. Dumbledore wants Harry to go home to the funeral with her and he agrees. They meet her Godmother, Lucille Grant, and her Godsister, Cameron. Lucille is a super nice Scottish woman and Cameron doesn't like Harry because of all the crap he put Hermione through over the years. She basically convinces him to stop talking to her again. More stuff happens where Harry has to take care of Hermione, something she isn't used to, and at the funeral she has an emotional breakdown. Later that night Harry has to bring her out of a panic attack and sit with her while she pukes all night.

Obviously, this is concise, so if you're still interested, I promise actually reading the story is more interesting than what was described here :) But again, thanks for coming back!


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