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Review:shadowycorner says:
Lily hadn’t realized she’d been starting at him

I think you meant staring. :) Anyway, this was so lovely! You showed the reality and the darker side of parenthood and in a wonderful way. And at the same time, the story was so nice and calming. Your descriptions were wonderful. I could imagine almost all the things you talked about. And what I loved most were the little details that made me feel that James and Lily really do have this gorgeous love between them. Also, it was so unique to have Lily play the piano for Harry. I think I 'aww'ed audibly right there.

This story was simply wonderful and it made me smile and grin and feel warm at heart. I don't think one-shots like this are pointless, I really like reading about the little, random moments in the life of James and Lily. Thank you for writing it. :)

Liz

Author's Response: Oops thank you, my fingers always seem to do that ;).

I am so happy you liked this one shot, it was really fun to kind of give these two more of a human side. They were amazing people, but they were still people.

I have so much fun with details but I always wonder if they're too much, so hearing you liked them put the biggest smile on my face! Thanks for the awesome review!!!

Jami


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